Oh man! Awesome! Where do I even begin?

Before the Islamic revolution in Europe

Well I damn sure hope that doesn't happen... I live in Europe.

The makeup and perfume she was wearing were a sample of what she was expecting to give as payment for such favor.

Love the reference here. Not too subtle, not too explicit, just right. Love it!

I know but I never stopped loving you goddamn it!

This broke my heart. Written so well it legit broke my heart.

The story was awesome. The idea is amazing! And your writing is splendid! Love the attention to details!
I'm very happy to have found your work! Keep it up!

_{Edit: I see in your profile that you are bald. So am I! Highfive! ;D Bald power for the win!
if only girls believed that.}