That is a very good result for a first attempt! The woman looks alive specially the eyes. I just noticed the right eyebrow more elevated than the left.
For the rays, I thought the angles need to be consistent from where the sun is assumed. Also, I think the rays should have hit the hair on the right side too and not just concentrated on the face. Though thatbis with the assumption that the sun is on the upper right side, is it?
I ams sure you will do much better on your next attempt. Keep drawing! 😊
Reflections only go on the face, it is a strategy to better highlight the beauty of women. But you're right, I should be more careful in the aspects you mention. I will try to do better in the next one. Thanks for your comment. I accept your criticisms and suggestions. To continue drawing.
Thank you for taking my feedback constructively as how it is intended. I am sure you will do much much better next time. As they say, practice makes progress. 😊