hi @rachelsvparry
it is really interesting the explanation you gave of your drawing and what was the original sketch! an extraordinary way to express one's feelings. there is also a psychological theory that says that we show others only 20% of us, while the remaining 80% keep it as the submerged part of an iceberg: hidden from view. it is the world of the unsaid, of controlled emotions, of what we do not even know about ourselves.
congratulations and thanks for sharing not only your art but also your feelings