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RE: my comic: Android Blues 63 - 65
I'm still not understanding why only her clothes get completely wrecked and no one else's does XD
LoL "jumped on a bus" I suspectted how she would "jump on a bus" after you put it in quotes but it was still fun to watch XD
hehe
well she did climb through hole in the floor on rope ladder, jumped through glass window, wrestle a soldier, crash into a neon sign and fall on a speeding vehicle... :)
I noticed how she was diving towards to bus and the next panel shows her falling butt first on it. Not a critique, just thought it humorous.
That would work too. but she actually hits the bus head first. Notice her butt and legs still visible up in the air? Or maybe I drew them so roughly they're mistaken for arms? :)
Possibly. I like your work either way!
She's coming down from a diveroll I think. I'm glad she's an android as that was a neckbreaking height/speed/angle she was coming in on XD
I have gently nitpicked a few of the previous action scenes, I don't think he minds crit when it's useful and constructive, and it doesn't really stop the rest of the work from being amazing ;D
Yes I don't mind at all, quite the opposite, feedback is vital to improving stuff! :)