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RE: The second honeymoon - Short story
I like the openning of story.
the story is very reasoning and I feel this is an experience, even though I know this is fiction against the background of real life stories. but you succeed in presenting in a string of sentences that will bring the reader to the story. if this continues as a serial story I think it's good. because there is another side that Peter hasn't known yet. So it will be even more interesting ... I wait for the next story
Thank you for reading as always @rokhani!
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