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RE: Selena in Sepia, Micro-fiction
One sentence and fifty words. Nicely done. I'm not sure I could do it, maybe just try it and see how it goes. 🙂
I loved your story. And using just one sentence gave it a sense of hope...time flies so fast and it has a strong healing power. All is forgotten when Spring comes...even the dark brown chocolate tint. 🙂
Thank you, @roxy-cat. Yes, I think that is really the feeling I was going for -- that one can get through a difficult time, and tomorrow comes, and the next day and with each one a feeling that you can heal and begin again.