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RE: John 3:3 "Except a man be born again, he cannot see the kingdom of God."

in #christianity6 years ago

Since I saw this in "art", and don't believe the Bible is anything more than the word of man, I'll critique the visual effect only. (Which is what I do at work anyway.) :)
The photo is catchy and arresting, gives a feeling of danger standing on train tracks looking out of a tunnel into blinding light - is a train approaching? We don't know. The strong reddish colors help give that alarming feeling. But it's hard to see what it has to do with the message, maybe we're looking into heaven? Perhaps a quote about light ("I am the light and the way" for instance?) would work better.
Further, I'd recommend avoiding novelty typefaces, sticking to only one typeface, 1 or 2 sizes, and 1 color (not counting the tiny text). Reddish orange or light blueish grey (like the reflection on the floor) would probably work great in this case.
Best regards,
Steven

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Thank you for your critique Steven, it was very nice of you.
Kind regards.
Karen (Pilgrimtraveler)

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