Woooo yeah! Thank you so so much! I honestly cannot tell you how grateful I am for this contest anyway! Not only have I got to read so much hair raising horror, but it has made me want to write so much as well!

I nearly cried when I saw this! (I am having an emotional week lol) Thank you so much for your feedback at well, I was worried that the plot was too subtle, and it wasn't necessarily clear that she didn't expect the ending herself. I could write entire stories of just description if I let myself. I am still working on the other stories you kicked me off writing for this contest, so hopefully can use this to improve those. I would be honored if you ever felt like giving me feedback again :)

@riverflows - I loved yours when I read it, and I have been thinking about it a lot since, which is always the mark of a good horror! Something about the way the girl acted seemed so eerie!