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RE: Dead Poems Society, Round 8, Contest and Community Building
Hello poets, here is my dead poem ...https://steemit.com/poetry/@corderosiete/to-the-rhythm-of-the-water-original-poem-100-days-poetry-challenge-day-91-poem-89
Good use of images to convey an inner storm accompanied by a deep sadness mixed with resignation. Very good!
Thank you
Good imagery. The poem conveys a deep sense of sadness
You're right
I love your structuring (I don't know the correct terms but your line length etc), I write very similarly and I've always loved that in poetry you force cadence with word placement. Great job, I really liked this piece! Also this line was great : where the houses make the neighborhood
Thank you very much friend