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RE: Micro Fiction Prompt “Beacon” 250 words or less
I love it. Very intense story, @stever82. Crisis averted! That must be a very lonely job. And if you "fall asleep on the job" it could have dire consequences!
p.s. I would love to give you a few small editing suggestions, if you're open to them.
Sure I wrote this pretty late last night so my guess is I might have made a few mistakes.