Mine me, meld me [Day 98]

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Mine me, meld me

Fill me, receive me, release me, instill me—
with waves of calm majesty, dignity, poise.
Heal me, repeal me, rescind me, unreel me—
until I feel nothing but echoes of joys.

I am resung in the chirp of dead midnight;
I am refound—
by arbiting Time.
I am rewound into coils and consonance,
I am restrung—
with laces of light.

Seal me, fix me, tear me, nix me;
cancel my crudeness and cause me to shine.
Steal me, lull me, woo me, mull me;
brew me in fullness and rawness of thine.

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     6 years ago 

    Awesome poetry @d-pend. Amazing lines:

    cancel my crudeness and cause me to shine

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     6 years ago 

    Superb ! Great lines @d-pend !!

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     6 years ago 

    Bravo Daniel! Love this one!

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     6 years ago (edited)

    Ummmm.... It isn't enough to say that enjoyed every sound of the piece!!!!! I was reading it outloud to feel the beauty of the repetiton of "ee" in the first stanza crowned with "echoes of joys"

    Then all the "re-verbs" reinforced by the repetition of "I am" felt like resurrection:

    I am resung in the chirp of dead midnight
    like an old song that gets the soul of everyone who makes a cover of it. Daniel!!!!!!!! I'm, you know, emotional about this line. And then here again:
    I am restrung—
    with laces of light.
    again a parallel with music, that can fill you entirely.

    And the last stanza unlike the first one, which feels light, more like a release (haha, you even used this word), feels heavier, it's the contrary of release, it makes you stay, it affects you, changes you in a rude way, but it's needed to be released later.

    This piece reads to me from the end to the beginning, I even tried to read it this way, starting from the last stanza: all the suffering through fixing leads to the release! Oh, Daniel!

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       6 years ago 

      Well penned.

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         6 years ago 

        Read me, feel me, comment me...... Hah ha.... Nice poetry @d-pend

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           6 years ago 

          Beautiful envirmant photo thank for sharing

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             6 years ago 

            Well that was gorgeous. You've written a hymn. Huzzah:):):)

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               6 years ago 

              "Seal me, fix me, tear me, nix me;
              cancel my crudeness and cause me to shine."
              Awesome poetry. Very good. I appreciate your poetry. Thank you for share.

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                 6 years ago 

                Echoes of joy will listen to your ears. Open your soul and we will enter.

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