Catchy. Sounds pretty good. My speakers suck!. You might have something there. Keep working on the song. Refine, Crisp up the sounds and beats. not so much in and out up and down, Know what im sayin?. Let the rap flow... You start smooth and cool than kinda low tone and mumble through the rest.
"Make" it flow. All Sounds crisp smooth with solid delivery "good flow".
Piano works! However I could only Identify it as background sound. BUT! big BUT!...I am NO music pro...
I suggest fit it in only when it sounds sick! What!... Was that just piano? Sick beats! then get noticed. Great niche and talent to aquire. Very Cool my man.
Once again I am no music pro. So take what I say as a non musician. I was only ever allowed to play the clarinet in High School. Some form of punishment there...
Ha! Look at Bill playing the flute!...ITS A FUCKING CLARINET! I will see you in Gym class...Flinch!
Anyways.
No talents there...I have way more experience listening, enjoying rapping for fun and once upon a time booking great entertainment of all sorts.
Just motivation and constructive criticism from someone who doesn't really know Shit!
Cheers