This is an arguable article. Yes technology has made the world so much easier and so much nicer... However it has also brought about a lot of harm and damage to us. Take for example people committing suicide out of depression because they have been comparing themselves to others on Instagram, not knowing that not all they see there is real and sustainable. Or take for example the millions of people who lose their jobs daily because some super machinery has been created that can do the job of 10 people... So much trouble. So really, it depends on what angle one is looking from.

Nice article though. You need to correct a few typos and make some of your sentences shorter. You should also add examples to your subheadings, just like you did for the last one.

Cheers