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Your writing style is seriously incredible. I really enjoy the fact that you can convey such emotion within your writing without holding the readers hand. It's a very good example of show don't tell. I dig it a whole bunch!
Honestly the best praise I could hope for.
My greatest hope is I will be the kind of writer who can "show, not tell" -- so thank you very much for making my day with your comment.
You're welcome! I'm really excited to read more!
I'm guessing that Daphne is, at best, an elderly woman who lost her love to the Owl. If she is still alive, should he tell her, would it cause her greater grief to know her love has been alive all this time, but suffering under a curse - or should he just tell her he found the ring...I'm interested in seeing how you'll develop this part of the story. Hmm, maybe Daphne is a nymph who lives high in the mountain...
I know that I am not right with any of my guesses, but this is part of the pleasure of reading, trying to guess ahead. I even try to do it when I am writing, which often amuses my characters.
As you can tell, I am enjoying reading...
You are really good at guessing. I'm glad you enjoy that part of reading--trying to guess what is going to happen next is one of my favorite parts of reading. I think I learned that from my Dad. Thanks for your wonderful comments--I love to know that people are reading and thinking about my story--it drives me to try harder and write my very best.
You got a 38.73% upvote from @postpromoter courtesy of @bigpanda!
Great one @bigpanda.
Waiting for next part.✌
I'm really glad you liked it.
Thanks for sharing this incredible story with us! @bigpanda have a wonderful day
Thanks my friend. You have a most wonderful day as well.
Very beautiful and amazing story is that friend. I love your work @bigpanda.
Thanks my friend. As always, I really appreciate your support.
You are welcome my friend 😊.
Beautiful natural
Good post friend @bigpanda
Thanks @agussafrizal. I appreciate your kind words.
you are welcome friend @bigpanda
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feeling sorry for James, he should have continued his journey cause he was so determined to climb the mountain.A man so ambitious should not not let feelings overtake his ambition..btw very well written..looking forward to read mor from you :)
Perhaps you missed it, but James is continuing on his journey. He just keeps getting interrupted. We will see if he makes it to the top.
Amazing story @bigpanda thanks for sharing us.😊
Thanks so much for stopping by. I'm glad you think it is amazing.
Amazing story.i love your work @bigpanda .you selected hot topic😊
Thanks. I appreciate your solid support.