This is a dope story! I just read from part 1 til here in one go, and you kept me interested the whole way. I must say my favorite part so far was the beginning. The description of the grandfather's story and how he told it set a very cool tone, spooky but also realistic to the point that I was thinking it might be an actual memory of your real-life grandfather. I'm interested to find out what Jael/ Persephone's motivations are, and who all those people were, chopping each other up. Anyway great story, keep it up.