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RE: Asleep in Nara (Short Story Series, Pt. 6)
This is a dope story! I just read from part 1 til here in one go, and you kept me interested the whole way. I must say my favorite part so far was the beginning. The description of the grandfather's story and how he told it set a very cool tone, spooky but also realistic to the point that I was thinking it might be an actual memory of your real-life grandfather. I'm interested to find out what Jael/ Persephone's motivations are, and who all those people were, chopping each other up. Anyway great story, keep it up.
Thanks for reading! I'm glad it kept you engaged. As for Persephone and the Yakuza...all in due time.
Regarding the grandfather's story, sometimes reality is stranger than fiction. ;)