I like how you describe herself with a few sentences. There is nothing more to be said and her character is easily understood. I've just finished a book about a girl who was similar to your character and she also fell madly in love. It ended good for her and they somehow got together and I hope for your character to have the same experience :)

Very well written short story.. catchy, nice and easy to read.

Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your curie vote!