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RE: Look Into Her Eyes [Short Story]

in #fiction6 years ago

Reading it I had this creepy and horror chills running down my spine. I See myself as a fan of horror movie because you can't predict if all the caste will be killed or just one will survive and I always laugh when the screams start knowing fully well it's just a movie but this your "LOOK INTO MY EYES " scared the crap out of me .

The first paragraph made me suspect the writeup was horror but my mind was put at ease when you started talking about your photograph by the mirror only for paragraph 5, 6 7 to call back the fear that once held my heart at the sight of the topic.

First I thought it's the mirror that was possess and then I thought it's the frame because you took the mirror out of it and replaced it with your photograph but then the twist was the rumour of the painter making a deal with a demon in paragraph 14 that shattered that thought .

I tried to stop reading but when I got to the part of your boyfriend making out with the imposter and you had to watch wow I couldn't stop reading.
@Anikekristen this writeup made my day

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Oh, thank you, Eddyson! The red herrings are splattered all over, haha. And you picked them all up. So glad it gave the chills, as horror should. Thanks for reading and enjoying!

Nahhhh Thank you and I am looking forward to more of such from you.

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