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RE: Half-Buried - Finish The Fiction Story Contest
Yours it's not a deus ex machina but a good twist for sure. You've been able to play with all the prompt's narrative elements and maintain its original pulp and rusty atmosphere. I also liked your fly on the moon metaphor and the poetry within your descriptive part. Talking about horror.. I just finished to prepare a special prompt for week #12.