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RE: The Treatment Room - Weekend Freewrite (Short Fiction)

in #fiction5 years ago (edited)

Wow. That was pretty heavy. I was not expecting that ending to the story. Some intense stuff there, in a small package. Thanks for sharing.

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Cheers man.

Yeah, it wasn't a cheery story at all 😉

I'm pleased to hear the twist did its job, as I wrote this in 15 mins in weekend freewrite challenge. I did do a minute or two editing after the stopwatch but it's pretty much a first draft.

I think freewriting fiction like this can add intensity for sure as you don't end up assessing as you're writing. So it pours unfiltered from the subconscious.

Ha ha, I'm not sure what that says about the inner workings of my mind though 😂

Thanks for reading

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