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RE: Practice makes Perfect (Simulations, Chapter 4)

in #fiction5 years ago

Mr. A is a pretty lame name - if there's no reason behind it. I didn't decide for it until my brain suddenly presented me with an in-story explanation for why it'd be an excellent name.

Sophie is a treasure, and yeah her family life.. Let's not talk about that for now, shall we?

Yess invisibility is such a fun concept. Most super hero abilities have massive drawbacks if you bring physics into them. Why doesn't the flash give everyone whiplash, including himself?

Let's see in what other issues Finn eventually runs into!

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Why doesn't the flash give everyone whiplash, including himself?

Whiplash? Pfft. Why doesn't he instantly liquify his own internal organs? Or break his legs?

Or that, yes. So many plot holes!

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