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RE: Dark Alley. Fifty-word short story
Oh, nicely done on the noir style! Thrilling story. And I love how you suggest she was the bait without telling it.
Oh, nicely done on the noir style! Thrilling story. And I love how you suggest she was the bait without telling it.
Thank you! You noticed!
I was afraid that my intention would not be noticed. I am learning bit by bit! The Writers' Block has helped me a lot, I've been reading the Library of Infinite Knowledge