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RE: The Last Watcher :: 50 Word Short Story
Whoa. This is powerful, Neg. Agree with @mydivathings, the dropping of the gloves in the trash really paints the scene of the entire story. Eloquent display of the mechanics, showing the setting of the ER without mentioning it.
Thank you :) It's probably a common emotional scene; I kind of want to flesh it out in a short story more. Maybe for the next art prompt...
Oe, yes, do? I look forward to reading that.