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RE: Dark Alley. Fifty-word short story
Very nicely done!
Please forgive me if I suggest a quick minor edit or two, while you can still edit?
I think "stoped" should be spelled "stopped."
"Street was painted on blood."
I think possibly replace "on" with "with" or even maybe "in."
Otherwise, you created an amazingly exciting scene in exactly 50 words. Congratulations!
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Thank you! English is not my native language but I really appreciate suggestions and corrections, that's a nice way to learn
And with the permission of the people who commented (or from the people?), I will try to make the indicated corrections
I suspected that you may not be a native English speaker; and recognizing that, you've done an outstanding job of writing in English! :D
Thank you!
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all set.