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RE: Fifty-word challenge || Overcoming the past
Nicely done! I enjoyed reading this a lot.
You asked for honest feedback, and there are a couple of words I would change that I think would improve the language without changing the meaning, and still give you 50 words:
...make sure everything would work as expected...
One last look at the old barn...
Steem on! :D
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Thank you for the feedback, @creatr. Made a note of it. I reckon that my English needs improvement (second foreign language for me) and this type of feedback is more than helpful.
As for the story, I'm very happy you liked it. 🙂
Hi, @roxy-cat,
For a writer whose English is only a second language, you have done very, very well. :D
I suspected that might be the case, and I am very glad for any little bit of help I am able to offer. Please keep up the great work! ;)