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RE: Anytime Now | #fiftywords Challenge in Micro Fiction

in #fiftywords • 5 years ago (edited)

This is beautiful and sad, @joeylim. Nicely done. (One suggestion: I would change "this" in the last sentence to "that." It works better since your story is told in past tense.)

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    @jayna Thanks alot for the suggestion! :) I shall update it. Sorrys for taking so long to get back - was on a trip.

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