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RE: searchlight :: 50 word short story
Oh I love it! Thank you for taking my story a step further. But I agree... this still leaves many possibilities open. The character could be found a friend, a family member, a creepy woodsman, or perhaps the spouse he or she was running from. Or even an alien being. Yes... I think this story still needs a conclusion.
One step is all I got before I ran out of words. I see you offered a conclusion already! Sweet!