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RE: FiftyWords Challenge - Leaving
A lovely and thought-provoking story, @roxy-cat! Goodbyes are always hard. And young people don't yet understand the depth of their parents love for them, and how hard it is to let go. Nicely done.
psst... you want to change "bellow" to "below" in your prologue. :-)
Thank you, @jayna.
Amendment made. I guess it was a typo as this is an easy word. I wonder how come the grammarnazi bot did not pick it up. 😂