Thanks, Jayna! Yep, it is my first 50-word story and am looking forward to playing again.

It's funny with writing obscurish stuff online, isn't it. There's always this paranoia lingering when you imagine people flicking past your stuff because it's too much work. But in the end, I guess people can't worry too much about whether their writing is too heavy or too dense or too obscure or whatever if that's how they write.