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RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #51! by @blueeyes8960

in #finishthestory5 years ago

Damn, now I adore this ending. I love how you developed the character, the history of years, the moment that build up to this. You are a real talent for plots and you definitely delivered again here. You had me hooked from the beginning, I love how firm you were in your direction, you open maintaining the perspective exceptionally well and the flash back to her motive is just seamless. I really like that you used Ian Dankworth as a character, rude old git at that lol. The way you bring Neelix in throughout roots the story so well, and brought a reliability to Lucy that almost contrasts with her as a murder, which feels like a very human touch that I really appreciated. The pocket watch really makes this, it's such a brilliant detail, the final part of her plan coming into play. A really wonderful ending <3

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Thank you @calluna for your indepth comment! It makes it so much more fun writing these when you see that someone actually reads them. And takes the time to comment like this!
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