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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #39! (entry by @blueeyes8960)
whew. what a trip! I enjoyed your use of surrealist and dreamy language to create the dream state.
In this dreamworld that he was learning in increments to control, murmurings of the Ancient One were being absorbed by his being and translated into meaning.
Ah. The Ancient One. But benevolent? A savior of the human race? Questionable....
Yes, the Ancient Ones arranged for the ruby power stone to make its way to earth, but, who's to say it was actually to SAVE the race? Perhaps in the end, it enslaved them....
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Yes, her language choices were effective.