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RE: MY ENTRY -- Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #30! -- THE BATTLE OF BLOODNECK VALLEY
The ground shuttered as it spoke, “It burns in us.” With a smile, he turned to the battle and growled, “We are not in hell yet. Let us finish this…”
Nice ending line. I enjoyed your ending and the action/suspense of the battle. Happy you joined the contest
Well, it all started with a rather nice story... I have a question, do you read H. P. Lovecraft?
500 words was not really enough to do it justice, the last line was really where it all started. When I read your story, it was the first thing that popped into my head. What would his god say if he were there waiting for his soul to be crushed?