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RE: Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #28 My Entry
I liked your "finish" to this story @stever82! And I read the comments as well ... perhaps to clarify the different points of view, you could just use a text divider?
Sorry I am not sure what you mean can you give me an example? But thank you for reading it. Glad you liked it.
Hey no problem; I just meant that when you switch perspectives (from one person to the next) and the story is coming from "there perspective", it might be useful to insert something like this to show that it's a break of sorts:
Does that make sense?
Okay I get it now I wasn't sure you meant that kind of divider.
Oh good. It's a non-literary fix of sorts, but I think it would help clarify it for some when they're reading :)