When you describe what the characters see, what they smell, and the rest of the things they perceive, you get the reader to get into the text. It's a good strategy, because I got caught. You have good writing skills, and it's good that you use tools to take care of your grammar. On the other hand, history is interesting, and you gave it a cold, elgant ending. Greetings, friend. I will follow the rest of your content.