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RE: Finish the Story Contest - Week #50! - The Abysmal Biscuit, My Ending
The old man is actually the new Dracula? You should have described more how handsome he is when he becomes young again, that would please me :D.
Yes, he became the new Dracula after killing the previous one who had killed his daughter. After reading the start of the story and seeing the Carpathian mountains mentioned I searched to find the two cities mentioned where the train line was running. Once I saw there was a spot on the route that was just a 30 minute drive to Transylvania I knew what direction my story had to go.
I was going to go into more detail about the change in looks, but was already over 700 words and was supposed to do 500 words. I suppose at that point I might as well have added more. lol
Congrats @randomwanderings for your accurate research, which gave coherence and depth to your story. You must know that I was actually planning a trip to the Carpathians with Mrs. F3nix. Looks like they're an interesting and off the beaten track travel destination. I loved your Dracula's sequel and how the innocent Joelle has been lured.