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RE: MY ENTRY -- Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #30! -- THE BATTLE OF BLOODNECK VALLEY

in #finishthestory6 years ago

Thank you for such interesting continuation of the story. Well described battle from eh view of Shog, it is always a lot of emotions when you read such moments, you know that there will be only one winner, whose side as a reader you will take depends on your sympathies but also can be ruled by the author. Like the details and comparisons in your text, description of thoughts and emotions. Well presented story :)

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Thank you very much @stef1. In most stories, I probably would not take the orcs side, the way the first half was written I felt like the orcs were the hero/underdog. I guess it sometimes helps to be able to see both sides of the conflict, in stories and in life.

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