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RE: I Was Alone | Lola's Story Part 23 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: back pain

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

My thoughts on part 23

  1. With Mark's warnings about Bryon do you still think that Kyle's death was an accident?

    I am starting to suspect that Kyle's death wasn't an accident at all and that Lola won't feel the need to blame herself any longer. Even so, that won't bring Kyle back. But if his death wasn't an accident, who is responsible and why? Did Kyle know something he wasn't supposed to know? Did he stumble onto some classified information at some point in time? Was he going to expose some dirty cops? The possibilities are endless and I am sure @freedomtowrite won't disappoint.

  2. Now that Lola is in possession of the mystery envelope, do you think she could be in danger?

    Absolutely! With Bryon asking about the envelope, whisking her away, and keeping her from texting her mom he was definitely up to something. Plus, Marks seems to have resorted to spying on Lola to ensure her well-being and that alone is sounding my alarm bells!

-Aimee

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Your questions and thoughts are so goodI want to answer too! Hahaha

Ha ha ha! I am glad they don't disappoint! -A

Edit to add: I wish you could answer too! But... I guess you'll yet have to write us another part instead.

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