RE: An unexpected visit | Lola's Story Part 37 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: quadrillion
Whoa Mark, where did that come from?
Story Club - Everyone's Invited
Are you enjoying @freedomtowrite's story as much as I am? I always find myself wondering where Lola's adventure will take her next and I am curious if you are too. I wanted to invite you to Story Club where we can share our thoughts on each new part and reflect on where the story began. With @freedomtowrite's permission, I will be posing a few questions after each new part in the hopes of sparking some lively discussion. Are you in?
Part 37 Questions
How do you feel about Gloria's reaction to Lola revealing Kyle's letter?
Do you think Mark jumped the gun by kissing Lola? How do you think Lola will react?
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Cheers, Aimee
My thoughts on part 37
How do you feel about Gloria's reaction to Lola revealing Kyle's letter?
I am a little disappointed with Gloria's reaction. I can understand that she wants Lola to be happy again and sees the reality is that, eventually, Lola will have to move on with her life but I expected more empathy from her, to be honest.
Do you think Mark jumped the gun by kissing Lola? How do you think Lola will react?
I have such mixed emotions over this kiss! I want Lola to be happy and I believe that Mark whole-heartedly cares for Lola but I just keep questioning the readiness. But, maybe this kiss is exactly what Lola needs to pull her out of her grief, to accept Kyle's loss and start down a road towards happiness again.
Cheers, Aimee
Don't forget to leave your thoughts in the comments below!
Hi @canadianrenegade
Hello.
Q1: Disappointed too, didn't expect her to react that way at all
Q2: Mmmm... @canadianrenegade I did not think in this direction o. Lol. Well no though
She needed something comforting😁, and Mark came through. She might likely act like nothing happened but of course think about it later.
With all the flirting they've been doing that kiss will surely stay on her mind for a little while. -A