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RE: "Her Well Being" | We-Write! I write...You write!

in #freewrite6 years ago

This is a very nice twist to the story, very unexpected. The way that older lady is showing interest in him, I wonder if there is not something hidden behind her words. It would be nice to see how the story would continue further.

Great writing and finishing the story. Thank you for sharing!

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The neighbor lady does spell it out: men like to look, and so does she, but she's still a good wife. She flirts. It doesn't mean she's going to sleep with every guy who looks cute and needy. :) But the reader can put a spin on it he wishes, eh?

Well, dang, here I go again:
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Yeah, voting power go down too quickly! :)

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