Without anesthesia, it was excruciating

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

The pain of removing the atomizer was excruciating. The tech gave no mercy to her. There was no way this should have been viewed as "outpatient surgery", and without the option of anesthesia?

It was clear that removing the Nutrica device was frowned upon. After all, wasn't society so much better with everyone hopped up on the green, little pills?

She refused to let the well of tears behind her lids spill. She wouldn't give them the satisfaction of knowing they could break her. He saw the shine in her eyes and smirked to himself with an evil, malicious satisfaction.

"Is that it?" she rasped out, her voice trembling with bitter disdain.

"Hm." His refusal to acknowledge her further infuriated her more.

"Good riddance."

"Riddance? ha. I've seen all you holier-than-thou martyrs before. Make sure you request me when you're back in here for a new installation. I'll even keep your old atomizer here for you." He waved the device inches from her face as she grabbed her jacket and stormed from the room.

On the other side of the door, fidgeting surreptitiously, was a nurse hiding her face partially behind a clipboard. Without any regard for the newly operated tissue, the woman clawed her arm, pulling forward. Breath and spittle streaked across the girl's face, as the nurse rushed words into her ear.

"Run for your life."


This has unintentionally become a series of indeterminate length from the freewrite prompts. If you'd like to see the previous part - Part 1

To continue to the next part - Part 3


This post was an entry for today's freewrite challenge from @mariannewest and @freewritehouse. Prompt: "run for your life" If you'd like to enter - feel free! The more the merrier.


Thank you to my graphic god @penderis (that's a small g, Pen lol) for my Dreemie Divider! It's exactly what I wanted.

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This post was originally posted here. I am the original author, @dreemsteem

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Wow this was chilling and deep, I got lost in it and almost weeped... be well my friend, please post and post again.

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To move you that immensely is a GREAT compliment to me! Thank you for that my friend! <3

Guess what I purchased today? Get readyyyyyyyyyy :)

Ooh, this is interesting. Building continuity between freewrites. I wonder if you can keep it going?

Yes - @freedomtowrite ended up doing this last season! and I think @feltbuzz might do the same?
I didn't intend to! LOL but day 3 worked so well with day 1??

i'm not sure if i can keep it going or not... we'll see what the prompt does hahahaha
I won't get back to the computer to check what the prompt is until later - so.... i guess we'll see??? LOL

That sounded painful
Of course any sort of pain scares me so she is very brave .... shudder

Yep - she would rather live without it! Very brave indeed!

Thanks for coming by (and for all the comments hehehehehe)

Wow... That had to hurt 😢 but really brave of her... and your writing made me almost teary... Well written and thank you for sharing. ❤️🤗❤️
Loved it!

Yeah... Cruel people!

I don't like making people upset...but I love that my writing can bring out strong emotions!!!

Thanks for the encouragement sister ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Yo you starting something over here? Sounding interesting... tag me in the next one 😉

hahahaha i didn't MEAN to start something! LOL BLAME @MARIANNEWEST hehehehe

if there is a next one - i will for sure tag you ;) (not sure if there will be???? hahahaha)


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hey thanks so much!!!! I really appreciate it :)

Arghh - you better don't stop here with the story or I might have to come your way after all and tickle it out of you!! 🤪

Am on the edge of my seat!!

hahahahahah i didn't mean to do this! LOLOL i don't even know if there is more inside my brain???? LOL
we will have to see what the prompt is today i guess. hahahaha if you pull something out of me... hooray!!!!

That sounded painful
Of course any sort of pain scares me so she is very brave .... shudder

whoooooooooooa. that was a lot of comments! LOLOLOL

OMG
This is how you get noticed with engagement 😂😂😂
So sorry, I was concerned that was happening though there was nothing happening on my side
So I kept clicking on “post” and suddenly realised maybe it was going through afterall.
I have deleted the echos 😅

hahahahahahahaha yes - i'll never ever ever forget your name now LOLOL

no worries - it was really funny and made me giggle - i knew what happened hahahahaha

i hope you didn't burn through lots of RCs with all those echos hahahaha

:)

hahaha
My RCs are good
I keep hearing of the RC issue but I haven't had a problem since that initial VP drop to 20% after the hardfork....
It's almost like that crazy week didn't happen :)

well you probably have a lot if you are rep 58 hehehehe

it just really hit the newbies with a big punch!

i'm glad that you're not having issues :)

Yes, so I keep hearing
It's amazing how some steemians are hell bent on helping the small fishies to grow
One of the reasons, why I keep going here on Steemit even if the rewards aren't as amazing as it was first presented.
And I know you are one of them, so truly appreciate your efforts <3

That sounded painful
Of course any sort of pain scared me so she is very brave .... shudder

I hope you get all the alien stuff out.

^^That was me^^
Testing out my sons new account:
Memes work. Check

and this is me.... (@dreemsteem) .... Should I start shadowing his account now for welcomewagon? or are you going to handle all his training hehehehe

We'll see. he is young but is the more responsible one.
Weather he likes typing remains to be seen.

You should use this gif I made. It kinda matches your avatar.
steam-train.gif
Toot toot!

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that is amazing. oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!
i so love it!!!!

can you make it brown instead of blue? hahahahahaha and then i can use it for Welcome Wagon???? LOL

and typing. yes. well... typing is important on Steemit hahahahahahaha

i might drop you a DM later :)

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