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RE: An Unfortunate Adventure! #freewritemadness: Day Five
when you said in your introduction that "my words aren't the best today", I was already doubting the lack of confidence in them, and after reading this chapter, I can confirm that there is no need to worry, you've found a nice rythm and stablished some basic info about the world, that is good.
About this chapter, nothig exciting yes, but quite a pleasant read, and another bit of the main character's psyche interacting with something so... well, fantastic. Will keep reading!