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RE: Bananafish Feature: Expurgation Edition
Marco here... talking about the haiku.
I can notice you somewhat included it in the "Felixverse", citing in the FTS the same "hallelujah" the crowd bestanding the pyre shouted to the sky.
Also, you should feel proud to know your style of haiku is becoming famous between the other participants... the onomatopoeic verse gives a lot of movement and modernity
UwU ~ Thanks, it feels... great to even have an influence on here... thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments. The new ending should be considered, the old as a background element now exposed.
Yes, the new ending should be considered, and the "hallelujah" to which I was referring now is gone... nevertheless the sensation that every thing you write is tied together remains.