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RE: Bananafish Feature: Expurgation Edition
Ooo a thrilling chase, the cop and his son. There was a great moment when it was hard to tell which side they were really on, catch up watching the chase. The dynamic between manny and thomas is so good, the reaction to his pride is just <3
Left kinda wondering what side he was really on, he died for his incompetence, but was that what it was, or had he let things slide? He put forward an argument for not pulling the rip cord. This in itself is a beautiful touch, the human dilemma of having chosen one side, but deep down, that torn feeling.
and <3 - very much hope that cutie pie bunny of yours was able to catch every one for use in future magics, and gave you plenty of cuddles in return
UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! My ending took away from the car, thus why I pointed to binoculars and the differing speech that would seperate Sheriff Worcester and Manny.
<3 - Crickuna,... Grrr! The bunny’s not... Anyways, please don’t choose a bakery that despises witches. Detected lethal levels of poison on my cookie, surprised the bakery didn’t poisoned yours... Stay safe Crickuna!~
Awww damn, I thought they were one in the same, it was the smoking and the kid. I figured the different speech was picking up on where it said in the first half about manny being different at home. Ohhh so manny and the gang were the ones Worcester was watching! I love that this works on both, I read it as Manny being Manny Worcester, sheriff, who jumped in a truck with Kayla (part of the other side) before taking up his post, and watching her with his son, getting involved like watching horse racing, and having mixed feelings about the sides. You know the old local dude joins the oppressive force to police local area so he can be less bad than they would be. But actually, manny and the gang are the ones our sheriff here is following with his son, and thats a really nice touch, the bringing that dynamic in from both sides. two halves of the same story, each a father and son, only one made it.
And hey! Cute is the most deadly weapon of all ;)
What! Why i'll go back in there and... buy more baked goods cos they taste awesome... but don't worry sweet hell fury, i found you a nice box of sealed newt candy <3
And, we can go back later and raze the place, better cookies down the road anyway, messing with my little ash, like she isn't the most dangerous girl out there...
Yeah, wanted to create a distorted mirror reflection of the father-son pair but on the Old Society side (Remember Eleven-Ninety-Nine? Not needed, but referencing that and Appalachian Grave + Vampire in forest Prompt in FTS.)
Cuteness... Hmph~... Wha-what- Newt! Thx!... Will definitely need it for my potions-n-hexes... Anyways, ready when you are Crickuna!~ They better learn my name, for I am the cruel- coolest girl you’ll ever meet!
Ahhh yeah! Jeez how do you hold all these in your head after the fact. Ahhh i have this image of you with like a giant extra brain in a fishtank where you store all this knowledge!
And and, look, I went to the good bakery for ya ;)
<3 - That’s why I love mystery, gives people to think of something as I chillax with my gasmask, suit, ak74m-n-rum.
Unhappy circumstances led to the happiest of possibilities, another wonderful story to read from you <3
i shall return on my break to truly enjoy this new feast