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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #1
Blumine canvas with
Solitude of distant form
Mystery beacons
Are terrible puns considered as grounds for automatic disqualification? 😔
Blumine canvas with
Solitude of distant form
Mystery beacons
Are terrible puns considered as grounds for automatic disqualification? 😔
To me it looks original and the middle verse is quite remarkable.. bravo!
Thank you! Puzzled around this one for quite a bit, because I could come up with only one idea for the concept.
Considering there are several Japanese haiku made of onomatopoeia or jokes, not at all! 😉
Welcome to Mizu No Oto!
Thank you! I'll try to sneak in one whenever possible :D
I love it when there is a word that I don't know the meaning of (blumine), so thanks for that! What little I "know" of haiku comes from one week of class, Marco and F3nix (and google) so I can give you nothing in the way of feedback for form and whatnot. But, I can say that I like this and how the 's' sounds within your word choices make my mind think of a sea.
A precious haiku, thank you!