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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #1
The water is still.
Deep and blue and cold it cries
out to me. I’m alone.
The water is still.
Deep and blue and cold it cries
out to me. I’m alone.
Yours is my favorite this time around! Personally, I'm not much for form and in the end I think a piece is all about what gives me the feels and this haiku does it. I didn't even consider looking at the photo from the perspective of the solitary red pole surrounded by cold deep water. 😍
Thank you for this haiku! You caught the sad side of the image, there are other interpretation but this is
without a doubt an element very present in it. ;)
Intense, well done Gaby!
Thank you. My first haiku. I think this contest is going to be fun.
😉