ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 22)
Hello Steemians! The ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds series is designed to be a sort of platform for sharing some of my greatest works with @adsactly readers.
Many of the verses I've shared and continue to share were written in collaboration with a friend of mine.
Others were written as solo projects and some made their way to the recording booth.
I've got another special piece for @adsactly readers today, this is a short verse which is designed for readers to 'sing-a-long'
The background music I wrote it to has been embedded below. I dare you to give it a shot!
I really hope readers enjoy these and let me know what they think about them.
Its fabulous I’m flabbergasted coming with that flow full orchestra and the brasses smooth like molasses better check your day passes.
Acids burn like its heat feel the motion in your body from tappin your feet.
It’s a flow joe better know though if the lows on better get a roll on to the protons in your cerebellum.
Ya you go tell em that the feelin is right and if ya like what ya feel we can do it all night cause its lucid amusing light the fuse an its about to explode didn’t have stop til ya hit the endzone.
Ran out of benzo rollin in the benz full focus check the lense tho eyes is roasted ego is boasting and we may as well be rollercoasting.
It’s a play on words one stone and two birds check the rhythm is it right in the right scale the beat to day or night flex run or fight or ya might just take a breather for a sec.
And be the light that shines so bright think to yourself for a moment realized it was the meaning of life and happiness had ya feelin alright now that’s tight and if ya figured it out young you must be sharp as the knife that cut through the misconceptions of pride.
Now forever bask in the glory and your prize for blessed is one that’s the apple of another’s eye.
Yah.
You know the prize is. So what's the prize then?
Said its the blessing in knowing that you are the apple of another’s eye.
And with those simple spoken words of wisdom.
The answer was humanitarianism and love for the fellow man and woman.
Yah they, saw the fountain of truth and never doubted it and every next word out their mouth they preached what they learned and went on spoutin it.
This piece was very fun to create. It just came so easily and really was a lot of fun to perform. Give it a try yourself and see if you can find a nice cadence for it.
No matter what, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about these, what you liked or didn't like, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!
Authored by: Zentalk
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I would like these words to have music, perhaps I could better appreciate the value and strength of this piece or text. I believe that music, as well as many things in life, have their own rhythm and cadence. The sun, the earth, our walking, talking, everything has its rhythm, its exact and perfect flow. The music as well as the stone that falls in a pond, propagates its waves until the most remote of the shore. Greetings, @zentalk
There is music, just play the youtube video I've posted above and try to recite the words to the beat. Thanks!
In your somewhat irregular and illogical type of writing, @zentalk, I highlight some images that come to me with a certain rhythm of continuous bass (as in baroque music), in which unusual images such as "Acids burn like its heat feel the motion in your body", or "you must be sharp as the knife that cut through the misconceptions of pride", or "the apple of another's eye". In the midst of your game of words and convoluted meanings, it appears, with difficulty, some sense that wants to vindicate the feeling of happiness of life, of truth and love of neighbor. Greetings.
Nice interpretation. You caught me on some very abstract metaphors and phrases. Acids burn like its heat... Well we can connect that with warmth, passion, a burning desire to live? Just coming up with a few ideas from it... The phrase about pride is very buddhist. If we are humble and dont think into things too much the truth my find us. Life can be as simple or as complex as we make it right? The apple of another's eye just means that someone loves you and cherishes you. If you feel bad remembering that should instantly make you feel much much better! Thanks for trying to find meaning in the words.
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