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RE: ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 22)

in #lyrics5 years ago (edited)

In your somewhat irregular and illogical type of writing, @zentalk, I highlight some images that come to me with a certain rhythm of continuous bass (as in baroque music), in which unusual images such as "Acids burn like its heat feel the motion in your body", or "you must be sharp as the knife that cut through the misconceptions of pride", or "the apple of another's eye". In the midst of your game of words and convoluted meanings, it appears, with difficulty, some sense that wants to vindicate the feeling of happiness of life, of truth and love of neighbor. Greetings.

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Nice interpretation. You caught me on some very abstract metaphors and phrases. Acids burn like its heat... Well we can connect that with warmth, passion, a burning desire to live? Just coming up with a few ideas from it... The phrase about pride is very buddhist. If we are humble and dont think into things too much the truth my find us. Life can be as simple or as complex as we make it right? The apple of another's eye just means that someone loves you and cherishes you. If you feel bad remembering that should instantly make you feel much much better! Thanks for trying to find meaning in the words.

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