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RE: An Unfortunate Adventure! #freewritemadness: Day One
Sometimes things written for fun end up being better reads than perfectionis-highly-edited ones. Not all that rough, promising start, and I don't know why but I quite liked the line “Shut your thoughts, idiot”.
That's what I think also! :) A lot of my favourite reads would not be considered highly-edited at all.
Hehe, I giggled outloud when I wrote that little piece of dialogue. :) I'm glad you liked it!