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RE: Carnaval Apocalypse - Part 2 - A Not Too Distant Future Scifi Story
Still hate italic dialogue 🤣 also you switched tense halfway 🙃
Could totally feel both the paranoid people’s fear/concern and the bravado of the two young’uns 😆 and the general excitement that would be rippling through the crowd watching them march towards the cloud.
Guess we’ll find out next episode what’s in the cloud or if they get stopped 😆
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Anything to scare off perfectionists and get rid of my own perfectionism.
Glad to hear that you can feel the feelings though.
The only thing I know about what's in the cloud is that it's not stored on our computers ;>)
xx
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;>)