Not a guy you want to meet walking down the street but I like the character that you gave him. We're not supposed to like him, we're supposed to be afraid of him and I guess that we are :)

You managed to finish with a great open end! I really like that we can finish the story ourselves and give it a direction that we like :)

Oh and I've never heard people swear like this. It made me laugh :)

Thank you for sharing!